5 summary points about the essay....

1. The essay was free flowing and fluent through out her writing. There quotes were all Incorporated really well within her essay.
2. There question was not vague but not detailed however, it was debatable and they explained and debated about it really well.
3. The structure of their essay was clear cut and concise, it was always straight to the point, they did not waffle on.
4. The terminology was all correct and well used, it did not feel as the candidate as trying to show off and just right big words everywhere.
5. The subject they chose to base their essay on was very interesting and it looks like the candidate had some interest in it.